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-    content="Chase Dumphord — digital systems builder focused on infrastructure, Linux, K3s, Proxmox, APRS RF edge systems, and real-world technical problem solving."
+    content="Chase Dumphord digital systems builder focused on infrastructure, Linux, K3s, Proxmox, APRS RF edge systems, and real-world technical problem solving."
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           <h1>I build systems that <span class="accent-word">connect</span> hardware, networks, and operations.</h1>
 
           <p class="lead">
-            Chase Dumphord — infrastructure builder running Proxmox, K3s, TrueNAS, and APRS RF edge systems out of Oxford, MS.
+            Chase Dumphord infrastructure builder running Proxmox, K3s, TrueNAS, and APRS RF edge systems out of Oxford, MS.
             I build things that actually work, then document how they work.
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               I'm a technical professional focused on digital systems, infrastructure, networking,
               automation, and hands-on system integration. I build things that are practical,
-              reliable, and well-documented — from homelab services and live dashboards to Raspberry Pi
+              reliable, and well-documented from homelab services and live dashboards to Raspberry Pi
               deployments, APRS iGates, and complex troubleshooting workflows.
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               My background blends field engineering, industrial technology, and infrastructure
-              problem solving. Increasingly I'm integrating AI tooling — using LLMs for system
-              documentation, automated diagnostics, and workflow acceleration — as part of how
+              problem solving. Increasingly I'm integrating AI tooling using LLMs for system
+              documentation, automated diagnostics, and workflow acceleration as part of how
               modern infrastructure gets built and maintained.
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             <h3>What I Bring</h3>
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-              <li>Industrial and field-service technical background — hands-on problem solving under real constraints</li>
-              <li>Linux systems administration — service management, troubleshooting, automation</li>
-              <li>Networking depth — VLANs, DNS, reverse proxy, firewall config, failover design</li>
+              <li>Industrial and field-service technical background hands-on problem solving under real constraints</li>
+              <li>Linux systems administration service management, troubleshooting, automation</li>
+              <li>Networking depth VLANs, DNS, reverse proxy, firewall config, failover design</li>
               <li>Infrastructure-as-documentation mindset — everything I build gets written up</li>
-              <li>Homelab → production thinking — I build lab environments that mirror real-world system design</li>
+              <li>Homelab → production thinking I build lab environments that mirror real-world system design</li>
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-                Currently positioning around digital systems, infrastructure, and technical operations —
-                especially roles where hands-on problem solving and system integration matter more than certifications.
+                Currently positioning around digital systems, infrastructure, and technical operations 
+                    especially roles where hands-on problem solving and system integration matter more than certifications.
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